Friday, 23 August 2013


Walt: analyze the character in a story.


I have chosen Jamie. Why because he is the main person in the story.

Jamie was babysitting Daniel. Jamie builds ramps and roads for the toy car to drive over. Jamie halfs the cake with him and Daniel and they both eat it. The both of them play memory with the cards. He reads a book to Daniel to put him to sleep. Jamie says to his sister “Stop watching your stupid videos and babysit Daniel”. You can tell he is always angry and mad and stressed at his sister Hannah. “ Why does she get money she didn’t do nothing” growls Jamie. He has brown spiky hair. Big beady brown eyes, tan brown skin, red t-shirt and blue pants.  


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