Mikayla's Fault

Walt: write a narrative.

Mikayla’s Fault  

This is about three girls living on their own in a little cottage. Then Mikayla decided to make some eggs for her.

The youngest sister was Tainah the second youngest sister was Mikayla and the oldest sister was Crystal. They all lived in a little cottage on there own. One afternoon Mikayla decided to cook some of her lunch because she was starving. She placed the pan on the stove, cracked the egg into the pan. It was grizzling like bubbles. Then Crystal came into the kitchen, “Do you want to play tag Mikayla”, asked Crystal. “Ok, only for a little while because my eggs are on the stove”, said Mikayla. “Come on then”, said Crystal. They both chased around the house having giggles and laughing that Mikayla forgot about her eggs.

Mikayla walked back inside to check her eggs quickly. She walked into the kitchen, just started to panic and screamed telling Crystal to get outside. But then Crystal and Mikayla had forgot about Tainah there youngest sister. Crystal and Mikayla looked at each other “Where’s Tainah!”. They were both worried. “We got to ring the fire station right away” Crystal said. She dialed the number 111 for emergency. The ambulance turned up in time. The fire was leaping over the roof tops. Crystal and Mikayla told the manager Fatu that Tainah there youngest sister is inside the house, all alone asleep. The fire men had there gear on and started to squirt out the water from the hose onto the house. It was squirting like shooting stars.  

The manger Fatu rescued Tainah and dragged her outside. He placed a towel around her and gave her a glass of cold water. Crystal and Mikayla raced to Tainah and hugged her tightly. “Mikayla got to carried away and forgot about her eggs thats how the fire had started” said Crystal. “Why would you leave your eggs on the stove and forget about it?”, Fatu said. “I was playing with Crystal and I got to carried away because I was having fun” cried Mikayla. “But I'm really sorry I will never do that again” cried Mikayla. “Well good you won’t” said Fatu. “ Well can I take you girls out somewhere if you like” Fatu offered. “Oh yes please Im starving” said Mikayla. They all started to laugh at Mikayla.

Never let things cooking on the stove always watch your cooking. Turn the stove off before you go to play. Let an older person do it for you or watch it for you as well.